I don't know about all the copy being in the white spaces for the "Widespread" concept. Posters are meant to be quick reads so that viewers can admire the message and the design.
The white copy in the "N" works, and I don't know what it says in there. I would focus on that block, to be sure that the copy conveys the message and concept for your design.
Again, the copy in the white strips, I don't think they're needed. It makes it more crowded to me.
As for the sneezing poster, I really like the direction you're taking! :) I agree with Austin to keep the white gradient in the poster. It makes a huge difference to the design overall. I also like the layout for it, so awesome job Pattie! :)
"get-choo" :)...haha, i love it. i'm noticing that the paragraph placement kinda divides the page in half. maybe the logos can balance it out by moving to the bottom right corner?
i find the black and white one to be really interesting visually. i don't know about the transparent box behind the logos though. i think it should be solid so the logos are more visible.
these are looking good! are the hands poster gone? :(
my first instinct is that I like the one with the white cloud better than the plain blue one, cool idea
ReplyDeleteoh thanks.
ReplyDeleteI don't know about all the copy being in the white spaces for the "Widespread" concept. Posters are meant to be quick reads so that viewers can admire the message and the design.
ReplyDeleteThe white copy in the "N" works, and I don't know what it says in there. I would focus on that block, to be sure that the copy conveys the message and concept for your design.
Again, the copy in the white strips, I don't think they're needed. It makes it more crowded to me.
As for the sneezing poster, I really like the direction you're taking! :) I agree with Austin to keep the white gradient in the poster. It makes a huge difference to the design overall. I also like the layout for it, so awesome job Pattie! :)
"get-choo" :)...haha, i love it.
ReplyDeletei'm noticing that the paragraph placement kinda divides the page in half. maybe the logos can balance it out by moving to the bottom right corner?
i find the black and white one to be really interesting visually.
i don't know about the transparent box behind the logos though. i think it should be solid so the logos are more visible.
these are looking good! are the hands poster gone? :(